NiteOwl Proposal Requirements PART I All students 2.3: Brief statement from each student member of the Submission Team, giving educational background (degrees earned/in progress) and research experience (e.g., "have worked / am working on XXXXXX project to measure YYY by means of ZZZ") Editing Team Focussed Executive Summary emphasizing science (TBD) imperatives, unique measurement strategy, social and economic benefits, and training strategy (already implemented in proposal phase). Draw on present 1.2. Editing Team Mention and discuss NiteOwl acronym earlier than p. 5. (TBD) Megan 1.2: Assessment of real prospects for measuring NO3; either we can, and should say how, or we can't, and shouldn't mention it at all. Jay Assignment of references and collection of reference list for referenced and unreferenced statements in proposal, e.g., 1.1, first paragraph. Gene Brief discussion (with ~1 equation) of occultation technique for atmospheric sounding. John + Allan Brief discussion (with ~1 equation) of tomography. David Figure showing spectral effects of various absorbing and scattering species at various altitudes. Final statements on: John + Allan - azimuthal and radial extents of sector over which tomography can be done; David - limiting magnitude for which 100:1 SNR is achievable; John + Allan - horizontal cell size for which tomography can be done, and the achievable accuracy in O3. David Brief discussion (with representative numbers) of basis of 100:1 SNR claim. Editing Team 3: Focussing and clarifying NiteOwl in the Canadian (Andrei) and International Context. Editing Team 4: Answering questions and completing discussion of (Jim) Required Theoretical and Modelling Support. Editing Team 5: Any more Required Support Measurements? (David) PART II John + Jim 2: How will fall speed affect achievable vertical resolution? David 3.1: Finalizing imaging spectrograph parameters. Editing Team 3.4.1: More information on possible data compression (Ron) schemes and candidate hardware. John, Matthias 5: More detail on currently mentioned Available Facilities, and add walk-in freezers at Food Science; cold room at National Hydrology Institute. James + Raj 7.4: Insert Data Acquisition section; status? David 8 - 9: Incorporate results of Management Plan team work; all prepared, just has to be inserted. David 10: Include Risk & Reliability team work; again, just has to be inserted. Editing Team 11: Develop and include words on communication (Chris) exercise regarding NiteOwl and its benefits, and team's willingness to participate. Also, can we expand or strengthen the statement of benefits?