3.1.6 Explanation of 100:1 SNR with representative numbers 3.2.5 revise power supply numbers? 4.3 clean up parachute discussion 5.2.2 integrating sphere for calibration 6.1 provide cost for calibration discuss requirement to generate accurate per-pixel spectral sensitivities 7.1 mention enhanced Orion availability revise mass distribution 7.2 produce/include star map figure for selected sector 7.3 update discussion of launch support 7.4 update discussion of data acquisition 8 harmonize schedule and discussion 8.3.2 make it make sense 9 write this whole section finish the budget numbers using BAL/AAI input After all that, generate a Table of Contents.