From:	DANSAS::STEELE        3-DEC-1996 20:24:03.12
To:	IN%"jeg320@mail.usask.ca"
CC:	STEELE
Subj:	RE: Comments on Proposal

> From:	IN%"jeg320@mail.usask.ca"  "James E Giesbrecht"  3-DEC-1996 20:13:13.71
> To:	IN%"STEELE@DANSAS.USASK.CA"
> CC:	
> Subj:	Comments on Proposal
> 
> Hi David,
> 
>         I've read the most recent proposal and have made some comments on it
> (see attached file JAMES3.RTF).  The comments are in tabular form and are
> sorted by section number, paragraph number, and sentence number.
> 
>         By the way, am I going to receive the MISSION OVERVIEW documentation
> from S. Koustav?  Or do I have to even worry about it all?  Are you planning
> another writing blitz for the blanks to be filled in and editing to be done?
> Is PHYS893.3 technically over, or are there more requirements (I'm curious)
> for the students?
> 
>                                                 James

James:

Thanks for your comments. Yours are the first I've received. I haven't read
them yet, but will do so ASAP and get back to you if necessary. 

I have just spoken with Sasha Koustov about the Mission Overview section. I
misunderstood and misrepresented his plans, BUT, he will call you and arrange
to discuss the matter with you face-to-face. He has found a concise statement
of the objectives, so it should be relatively easy to write down how we
address them. 

I'm not planning another blitz, since it has been my intention all along to
require no further student involvement beyond December 5 (Thursday). However,
I DO want a high level of involvement until then. Therefore, if you have time,
I'd be very pleased if you could give me your feedback (in the form of
concrete suggestions for improvement) of Part II of the proposal. 

Thanks, James.

Dave